Consequences of the Mind
1: Beginnings
By Mr. Intel
Reviews
The Resident posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 10:16pm for 1: Beginnings
Ok, as you can see from the review of the previous story of this pair, I try to read stories as their posted to keep from reading the sequel before the original. Anyway, an interesting start and I shall eagerly read the remaining chapters that you have written and await with little patience for the ones that have yet to be written. -grin- Keep up the good work.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 21st January 2006 1:57pm for 1: Beginnings
Thank you for writing. This is a good story. I like more daily detail in a story. It makes it more real. The characters become more real.
Thanks for doing such good work for those of us who can't write.
Tero Alanne posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 8:22am for 1: Beginnings
Mr.Intel replied: