By Mr. Intel
Reviews
topcatloveee007 posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2008 1:55pm
the scene in the kitchen where Ginny and Harry are strugling to say what they want, to snog each other senseless ;) and are instead tiptoeing around the issue, talking about siblings and the such is priceless. you have got the characters down pat. plus Ginny's extended metaphor and Harry's speechlessness shortly thereafter is perfect. onto the next kiss :)
topcatloveee007 posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2008 1:42pm
*sigh* that was so sweet, i love how cheesy harry could be and still get away with it
bookaholic_au posted a comment on Saturday 26th January 2008 8:10am
FYI, outside of the US and Canada butter is sold in pats, not sticks. It makes it rather irritating looking through American cookbooks. Sticks of butter, 'F, utterly incomprehensible.
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:50pm
It too bad that Dumbledore only see Harry as a weapon. It great that Harry and Ginny got together
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:46pm
very good one
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:45pm
very good one
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:44pm
This is a very good one.I like that Ginny and Harry are together. The best part of the chapter was when Harry was writing Ginny Potter almost seeeing how the name would look and at the time they was much of friends since just Ginny since she put Harry on probation, that told me there a good chance that they won't be friends.
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:24pm
This is pretty good.
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 2:22pm
This is really. it nice that Harry took the chance to kiss Ginny, sad that he felt the pain of think she was going to reject him. The good thing is that Harry got Ginny to changed her mind about him
joebob1379 posted a comment on Sunday 25th February 2007 5:57am
Hee hee, I love the end :) Definitely her best berries, indeed!
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 3:25am
Another very nice story. You're really good at this 'fluff' stuff. I've enjoyed them all and look forward to any more you might add. In the meantime, I'm off to read the 'rest of the stories' (to misquote an old radio newsman). Keep up the good work.
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 3:09am
I wish someone had ambushed me at that age (or younger). Good story. I enjoyed it. Keep on Writing and I'll keep reading.
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 2:54am
Well, sometimes parents just know these things. I wish they'd let us in on them though, it would make things a lot simpler. Good story and I agree with Harry, chocolate chip cookie dough tastes as good as, if not better than, the cookies.
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 2:34am
Yep, Blokes are dense. I didn't find out how dense I was until my 40th HS Reunion. Too late by then. Oh, well, nice story. Keep up the good work.
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 1:49am
Thank you again for a wonderfully warm-hearted story. I really enjoyed it.
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 1:36am
Cute. You use that to catch a kiss or two? I found it as sweet as the strawberries were supposed to be. Thanks for the warm smile that warmed my insides.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 21st January 2006 12:41pm
Very good. I am glad you have Harry refusing to go to the Durseley's. It is about time he didn't have to stay with them. Thank you for writing. This is a good story. Keep up the good work.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 21st January 2006 12:12pm
Very good. What a great ambush! Every boy and girl's dream! Thank you for writing.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 21st January 2006 12:05pm
Good story. I'm just sorry it took them so long. A really creative way of finally getting them together! Thank you for writing. Keep up the good work.
topcatloveee007 posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2008 2:31pm