Making it Right
Rat and Dog
By Mr. Intel
Reviews
Ariel Schnee posted a comment on Monday 9th August 2010 7:23am for Rat and Dog
Update this please!
darthloki posted a comment on Saturday 6th February 2010 4:48am for Rat and Dog
*jokingly*
He bring back a new strain of dragon pox with him or something?
I'm definitely intrigued.
mekareami posted a comment on Wednesday 25th November 2009 4:47am for Rat and Dog
Wow I really like what you have started here. A fresh take on the redo genre. Thank you for writing and I look forward to reading more.
koppe posted a comment on Friday 15th May 2009 12:58am for Rat and Dog
Great start, can't wait for more.
What is going on with the dragon pox? Especially since Dumbledore and now Ron seems to have gotten it for the second time... And what about the diary? Has it been destroyed or not?
Keep up the good work, and update soon!
Evan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th February 2009 1:06am for Rat and Dog
Please reply to this email, telling that you intend on updating it, as you seem to have a nasty case of writers' block, and I absolutely love the non-canon time travel fics.
Mr.Intel replied:
6 months later... I replied.
Sorry about the long wait, but fanfiction has been back-burner for so long now, I haven't even been checking my fanfic email account. If I ever get back into the game, I'll be sure to say so on my news page and update a story! Now... which one will it be?
--M
riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2009 12:52pm for Rat and Dog
good story
hptrump posted a comment on Saturday 3rd January 2009 4:49am for Rat and Dog
Love this story and all of your other stories. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Hoping some day you will complete your other stories.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Thursday 25th December 2008 6:25pm for Rat and Dog
wonderful. Congratulations, this fic is really, really good, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 1:59pm for Rat and Dog
GREAT STORY SO FAR. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATES.
Mindy posted a comment on Thursday 13th November 2008 8:46am for Rat and Dog
Great story!!! Keep up the good work. Any idea when the next chapter will be up?
The Resident posted a comment on Friday 7th November 2008 1:38pm for Rat and Dog
Nice start. Looking forward to where you go with it. (I'm also looking forward to a steady supply of updates. <grin>)
in-fanficauthors posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 2:20pm for Rat and Dog
Could it be communicable through notes, perhaps? Still, a somewhat odd plot twist.
Please continue.
Sonicdale posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 6:04am for Rat and Dog
Awesome chapter.
Like the new lines of plot you are weaving. Muchly.
I thought that the delayed reaction that Ginny had with Harry was very realistic. Good on that. I also liked that you are not making Harry a know-it-all. The forgetting of the bludger was perfect. I totally forgot about it as well.
Nice.
Good work. Now round up the horses and let's get to writin' more!
jakjakattk posted a comment on Saturday 25th October 2008 9:56am for Rat and Dog
OK, so peter is free and the dragon pox also changes thing a lot. this should slow down the light side while the dark side gets the extra push that they need to speed up the time line, I was surprised when Harry didn't track down the headmaster to get the other Horcrux(s) sort out before Peter could do to much damage.
Again you keep the writing up and I will keep reviewing.
Hot48cricket posted a comment on Saturday 25th October 2008 2:56am for Rat and Dog
Just a note to say that I really enjoy your stories and to appologize for not reviewing. (the only excuse I have is that I have none!)
I will try and leave a review for every chapter - even if its just a "good job"!
dougal74 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 7:45am for Rat and Dog
A very good story to date.
What lesson's is Harry taking? You've mentioned the standard curriculum, charms, transfiguration and potions. But not mention of whether he is using his second chance to improve his education by studying others, instead divination. I would have thought Runes and Arithmany...it would be interesting to see if this would affect the story.
Mr.Intel replied:
Typically, the students don't choose their courses until third year, so Harry will have his chance then. Right now, he's got a bit of something weird on his plate.
Thank you for reviewing.
Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2008 11:12am for Rat and Dog
Weird, a starnge twist but I like it and I like the fast pace you have set. What is going on with Dumbledore? Did he bring the Dragon Pox into the school? Does this have something to do with the Horcruxes? Can't wait to find out. Keep up the great work! - Anthony
Bob Officer posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2008 1:01pm for Rat and Dog
Good changes so far. Some slight variations on the theme. Peter had to escape or too much would have to be radically changed. I would think the year that will the hard one will be Harry being entered in the TWC, and Barty Jr replacing the real Madeye. Also you will have the problems on how to introduce and have the reconciliation between Lupin and Black in year 3.
All in all this is an interesting set of changes.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2008 12:29pm for Rat and Dog
Oh, boy, very interesting twist on things!
Sinfield4 posted a comment on Monday 29th January 2018 2:28pm for Rat and Dog