By Mr. Intel
Reviews
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 2:59am
Ch.5 - - This is really fun. Quit enjoyable to see the two come together with revenge in mind.
Terrific mind-of-Harry and mind-of-Ginny explanations.
Are you going to get other girlfriends involved?
This is a fun read.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 1:43pm
Ch.4 - - This is getting so good. The dancing and the getting to know each other were very good.
Congrats to all on this project.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 1:22pm
Ch.3 - - I just love it when Ginny realized Harry is going to court her. It is a favorite moment in H/G fics.
I like Ron the strategist in this also.
Fun, fun, FUN!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 1:08pm
Your Ch.2 - - This is rolling right along to something great.
The reactions of each are perfectly mapped out to each personality. Their exasperations and flusterings are well written.
Good stuff.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 12:53pm
Ch.2 - - Now this is escalating into an amazing new idea for the two to get together. What a clever plot device.
Excellent reactions of the youngsters as they go through what they experienced this day.
Cheers!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 12:41pm
Ch.1 - - Now this is a clever device to bring Harry and Ginny together. Nice battle scene, and new fighting spells.
Interesting brief friendship for James and Arthur.
Great start!
Mr.Intel replied:
I just think it's great that you're reading my story at all. :) I hope you are at least as entertained in reading it as I was when I wrote it.
Thanks, Aaran.
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 19th January 2006 8:21am
What a great story, I would love to see a sequel to this story. This is one of the most unique stories that I have read. I know Malfoy would be involved in the end. I cant wait to see what other stories you come up with next
MPF
Tildessmoo posted a comment on Tuesday 17th January 2006 10:38pm
Very interesting story thus far, and looking forward to the conclusion. Just one question: Is it actually possible to whistle a recognizable version of "Walk this Way?"
Hannah posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 11:11pm
I'm really enjoying this so far :) The links between the chapters aren't working properly though, they take you to the beginning of the current chapter rather than the next one
Aragorn posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 10:25pm
Just a quick note - all of the 'next' links at the top and bottom of the story so far just link you back to the chapter you are currently reading.
Enjoying the story
Aragorn
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 3:41am