Rachel posted a comment on Friday 27th January 2006 6:55am for 3: The Mysterious Letter

The ending is better than the beginning. Too much mush between H and G for me. Overall, the story is moving along, which is good. I love you. Oh and Mrs. Weasly says "I've got to sort out to the rest of the family." What does that mean?

Mr.Intel replied:

"Sort out" is British for 'take care of'. And you always think there's too much mush in my stories, so I'll take that as a good sign. :P

Quizer posted a comment on Wednesday 25th January 2006 3:27am for 3: The Mysterious Letter

Good chapter.

You know, I didn't read the end of book six very throroughly, as I was too miffed that the esteemed JKR saw fit to kill off Dumbledore, scheming old bastard that he might be in some people's fics.
But if I remember things correctly, the locket Harry and Dumbledore retrieved WAS the real one. The letter from R.A.B. Harry found immediately after Dumbledore's death said that R.A.B. had the locked and was going to destroy it. Of course Harry has no way to be sure of that, but it does sound like there's a defector in the Death Eaters.

In this story, it is quite a bit different. Is this intended, or did I really remember things that poorly?

continue soon
Quizer

Don posted a comment on Tuesday 24th January 2006 11:17pm for 3: The Mysterious Letter

Nice...I originally didn't see Harry relenting to Ginny so quickly, but I wasn't taking Ginny's stubborn attitude into account. I think you have tapped into her psyche quite well. I can fully see her telling Harry off for being pig-headed. Thanks for the quick update, I look forward to the next chapter!

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Tuesday 24th January 2006 10:59am for 3: The Mysterious Letter

Great chapter. I think that you have Ginny peged right, I think in the 7th book she is going to be going with them in the end. Because its going to be the love he has for Ginny that is going to help him kill Moldymort.