Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 8:30pm

Neat story here, though that last bit with Hermione was hilarious, and to think of a Phoenix type of Albus would be something indeed, though seems like Snape can't help being himself.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 7:24pm

I really liked this tale, even though am not a HBP fan. You've done well making the idea of Albus-out-of-the-ashes believable.

The thing that really bothers me is not your fault at all. I find it very hard to accept Snape as a good guy AFTER he has killed Dumbledore. I've read a number of plausible scenerios. I just don't want him to be good after that. It bothers me, and I feel 90% sure he'll be exonerated at least in part in Book Seven.

Very fine oneshot. Cheers!

Mr.Intel replied:

I feel exactly the same way.   I hate Snape and want him to be ground into powder, but I honestly feel that he will be cast as a somewhat-good character when book seven ends.

Thanks for the review.      

Patches posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 6:47pm

Oh, very well done. I love the fact that Albus came back like a phoenix. That was great. Of course Snape had to be involved. This is great. And Albus Potter has the same birthday one year apart, from his new sister. Happy birthday, Miss Potter! I love the way Hermione is talking to Albus. This is great. No wonder Albus was so smart. 6 lifetimes of learning to draw from. Thanks for writing. I look forward to any updates you want to make. Like to "Coming of Age". I would love to read more on that one. pms

KateHC posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 6:19pm

Indeed Thanks to kokopelli, who poked and prodded this story in the right direction. And to arasnaem for the actual baby Albie. But most of all to you, dear Mr Intel for giving us such a delightful story. "Little White Bumblebee" is quite accurate.

Kat Armstrong posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 5:34pm

Brilliant! I love the way you have Hermione telling him off as well. I can't wait to read more of this.

Darkness posted a comment on Monday 30th April 2007 2:48pm

Nice little story. It put a smile on my face! I wonder what secrets Albie still has to tell. The only part of the story I disliked was Snape, but then again I'm biased XP