Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 4:33am

Great story. I haven't ever finished DH, but you managed to bring it to life in a way that didn't leave me at a deficit. Thank you for writing in a style that didn't make assumptions of people's knowledge level. It really is a more thorough and entertaining style.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

Mr.Intel replied:

Mike,

Thank you for such a positive and helpful review.   You know as well as any how hard it is to gauge success with fiction, so it's pleasant to have someone tell me that it's working (so far at least!)

--M

Lon Huey posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 4:14am

Evil cliffy, mean author.

Mr.Intel replied:

Yes, I am. >:-)

Bob Joyce posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 4:07am

Well done! Glad to have you writing again.

Mr.Intel replied:

Thanks!   It feels good to write again.

Mrs.TiffanyPotter posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 2:32am

I'm so glad you decided to start writing again. I love your other stories and this one looks to be just as good.

Mr.Intel replied:

Thanks.   Hopefully it will be good.   Only time will tell, but I'm having fun, so that's at least half of it.   ;)

Treck posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 2:08am

Time for a RIOT!