PottersMuse posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 4:55am

Well? Where's the rest?

englishkristofer posted a comment on Sunday 24th February 2013 8:41pm

Awesome. Thank you for continuing to write.

mamasensei posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2013 8:34pm

Harry's just had the year from hell and died, and Hermione wants to spend the whole summer studying?? Poor guy! Brazil sounds much better. It sounds like Harry and Ginny are working their way back to each other. I'm not surprised to find that Harry had surprising inheritances. No one ever told him much of anything.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2013 2:12pm

I really like this story. Harry is gradually gettin used to having Ginny around and he really likes having her there. Ron is being the typical 'big brother" but he will get over it or Ginny will hex him. I'm glad Harry has plenty of money and property. A trip to Brazil sounds like a great vacation. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Jason9 posted a comment on Saturday 5th January 2013 6:40am

I'm looking forward to this story more and more - Thanks for posting, and keep up the good work!

brad posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2013 6:45pm

Mate, I hate to be the one to tell you, but Harry/Ginny is just so yesterday! In the four years that you've been absent we've all conceded that Ginny just isn't very nice and that Harry deserved better. You'll have to rewrite your story! :)

Okay, it's *just possible* that I'm a bit hostile to little Ginny, but her suddenly popping up and being in every second sentence of these two chapters is excessive. Remember, this is the girl that Harry barely thought about in the whole year prior to the start of your story. The girl he spurned for a sandwich. (It's why we've all moved on from H/G, you understand. :)) In comparison with the actual canon your two chapters seems super-saturated with the distaff redhead.

Seriously, the super-Ginny stuff smells. She's skipping her entire seventh year! She's being offered professional quidditch roles based on a *single pickup game* of quidditch between *students*!?! She's lying to her mother! Kingsley hands *Harry's* reward of a thousand galleons to *Ginny*!?!?!! (That last quite bewildered me.)

kstchr posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2013 5:55pm

Sounds like they'll be going on a holiday to Brazil before too long! So did Harry reschedule the appointment with the guy from the Wills department? The letter had said he wanted to meet "today", but later it has his appointment being the next morning. Also, a couple little things: parent's vault and parent's will should be parents'; parent's owned should not have an apostrophe. I thought it was very cool the way they left him the "secret" to the obviously-fidelius protected family home, on a scrap of blank parchment! I can just imagine some efficient file clerk thinking it was just a scrap in there by mistake and throwing it away...oops!

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2013 3:23pm

This is a very good chapter

englishkristofer posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2013 8:28pm

Where will you take us?

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st January 2013 4:19pm

An interesting start here, and will look forward to seeing if that last little trout of Harry was ominous or not.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 30th December 2012 3:10pm

It nice that Ginny is giving Harry a massage, too bad that Ron have overreacted

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Saturday 22nd December 2012 2:14pm

i hope you decide to carry on with the story

amulder posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2012 7:31am

Hey, nice to see you writing some more.

Looking forward to it continuing.

Jason9 posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2012 5:05pm

Off to a great start - I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

kstchr posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 10:22pm

Wow, I like this beginning! With the funerals out of the way, now Harry & Ginny can figure out where they stand again. I love how protective Ginny is of him, because he needs that looking after so he can heal up himself! Looking forward to more of this! :)

mamasensei posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 4:51pm

Nice to see a new story from you. Looking forward to more.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 12:15pm

Good start, but I think you're going to have your work cut out for you making a believable Harry / Ginny that's not too sappy or not too harsh.

I was a little suprised that you didn't mention the meddling ministry during the brief prologue. Are they going to behave themselves this time around?

Here's hoping for the best.

I look forward to your next chapter

rdgale

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 10:54am

This is an excellent beginning. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

lwj2 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th December 2012 6:50am

Good start, your Ginny fits my basic ideas of how she'd relate to Harry.

Thanks, best wishes for a happy Christmas and prosperous new year.

cybergades posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 11:08pm

Loved the first chapter. Looking forward to seeing more. keep up the great work.