Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 3:45am for 1: The Volunteer

This is a great start, but it feels like a half of a chapter. I don't mean to insult you; your writing is outstanding. I just want more.

This stands to be a great bit of fluffy and nutritious goodness, and it need the rest of the story.

Waiting for the other wonderful shoe to drop.

lemric posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 8:57pm for 1: The Volunteer

I think this has a lot of promise. It would be shame if you didn't continue.

Elfin posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 8:20pm for 1: The Volunteer

It started out kind of negativly (I won't say sad), but then the fact that Herm wants to teach Harry, I think is funny... This is a cool idea.

Alexis posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 3:21pm for 1: The Volunteer

I hope you do finish this! It's a cute idea and a great start to a story.

Merle Corey posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 12:05am for 1: The Volunteer

An intruiging glimpse into what could be a very nice tale. I enjoyed the part where Ron was trying to hide behind Harry. I would be interested in the next part for certain!

Don posted a comment on Sunday 5th March 2006 11:31pm for 1: The Volunteer

I think you have the beginning of a great story. Hermione seems a little out of character, but it has been 18 months since they've were at Hogwarts, so naturally she will have changed a little. All in all, I think its a great story, and I hope to see more of it when you have the time.

David Stanley posted a comment on Sunday 5th March 2006 12:30pm for 1: The Volunteer

Nice little story. I especially like the ending. It would be interesting to see how things develop for Harry and Hermoine down the line.

zac posted a comment on Sunday 5th March 2006 5:56am for 1: The Volunteer

this is absolutely worth continuing...this was a fantastic first chapter...please continue

Roxy1 posted a comment on Sunday 5th March 2006 4:52am for 1: The Volunteer

No update? but it has such potential. And harry is so nice and clueless so far...hmm i wonder if they will actually much discussing done at Hermiones...:P

zagan posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 9:09pm for 1: The Volunteer

Very funny, I love it. I hope that you will update sometime in the future, this story as real potentiel.
@++

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 12:24pm for 1: The Volunteer

Don't count on an update? Oh, come on! That's just mean of you! This has the potential to be a very fun fic to read!!!

jason papile1 posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 11:19am for 1: The Volunteer

Another story from you? I'll send you all the positive energy you need. I don't care if you write H/G or H/Hr or Harry giving himself a supportive talking to in the mirror. Just produce words on paper, add the name Harry Potter here and there, and then post it on this website. That's all I ask.

Fatpik

By the way, good start, and nice description about Hermione looking more grown up.

lauren2 posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 9:45am for 1: The Volunteer

i loved it !!
please continue the premise

john2 posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 6:08am for 1: The Volunteer

Such an evil tweaking of the shippers!

Good on you - glad to see that Someone is getting some writing done!

JEC

Mr.Intel replied:

Thanks, John. Glad you appreciate my perspective. Hopefully, I won't be the only one writing. ;)

M

Quizer posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 5:33am for 1: The Volunteer

Very interesting. It would be sad if there was no follow up on this, as it does seem a little incomplete. Nice break from the many stories where Harry is such a GOOD kisser right from the start. Would that be why you wrote this? ;)

Quizer

Mr.Intel replied:

Very possible. Perfect!Harry isn't something I enjoy writing all the time, so I thought a not-so-perfect kisser would be fun to write. Of course, with Hermione's tutilage, he won't be miserable for long. ;)

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 5:00am for 1: The Volunteer

Great start. :)

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 3:05am for 1: The Volunteer

I like it! This one has some real potential for a lot of things, including some very inadvertent humor. Along the way, I think Harry might well be surprised, again, at just how close Hermione has watched him and possibly rather pleasantly surprised as to why.

More, please?

Tim Henderson posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 12:02am for 1: The Volunteer

You should definitely keep this going. There are lots of things that could happen yet.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 11:49pm for 1: The Volunteer

Oh!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Tanydwr posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 9:11pm for 1: The Volunteer

Sounds good. I'm usually a Harry/Ginny shipper myself, but this has the basis for an interesting story.
And you've made it so there's some dislike at Ginny, because, as Hermione said, she never bothered to tell Harry she didn't enjoy kissing him when there was a chance they could do something about it. And now Harry's moping and his grades suffered.
Keep up the good work - I'd like to see an update on this.
Lol, Tanydwr