kyoshi711 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th July 2008 4:02pm for 2: Lessons

Cute story, but needs a little action! more excitement less methodical plotting.

MoonlightVixen posted a comment on Saturday 24th February 2007 12:05pm for 2: Lessons

I love the fact that Ron recognized Hermione's "Classic Berry" lipstick!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 2:36am for 2: Lessons

I had somehow missed this chapter, so read it after #3 - what a hoot, only Hermione would do critical analysis and map out a pathway to a "successful" final destination. Project management at it's best.
thanks

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 10:15am for 2: Lessons

buwhahahha! Great story so far, loved this chapter too! The bit with the death by giants at the end was great, though I could really see this as almost 5th year harry post GOF (ie right after the yule ball) or so in this case. Excellent job all around! The dialogue is hillarious, especially ron's comment when harry got back!

Don posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 2:19am for 2: Lessons

Great second chapter. I'd really like to see this story go further. Good luck with the rest of your writing!

sugarbear68 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 11:17pm for 2: Lessons

Ok, I have got to say that I love this story!!! Please continue. I have you on my alert list on another site, too, and saw that this story was now being posted there as well. Please keep up the good work. Also have to say, as someone who abhors fish in general but especially fried, had a moment of squeemishness (sp?) when he had fish and chips for lunch before his lessons -- urgh! But personal issues aside, I LOVE THIS! Thank you.

Malaskor posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:07am for 2: Lessons

Hehehehe... funny, especially the chart part. That is typical Hermione, always ordered and "by the book" ;)

Well done.

Scott M posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 6:56am for 2: Lessons

Points to you for using the phrase 'wounded Erumpent'. :-D In fact, that entire sentence was very amusing and nicely put together.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:38am for 2: Lessons

For having absolutely nothing planned I love this... it is amusing and bright and cheerful... something every depressed person should read!

As Always,
Muirnin - Who hopes you keep going with this while I try to resurrect my own writing and find it a new home!

Quizer posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:35am for 2: Lessons

Poor Harry... He really has a lot to learn, eh? Maybe he should have brushed up a bit beforehand, by reading some romance novels. Having a general idea what to do might have helped...


Quizer

ShadeHawk posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 12:39am for 2: Lessons

I hope that there will be next chapter. Really, really nice. I hope for some good hints on the art of kissing!

Would you build the whole A.U. for that story (like how Voldemort was wanquished, what had happened to the rest of classmates etc.), hinting at the past A.U.-ish story in discussion, descriptions and sometimes flashbacks?

Thanks for a nice, and not [much] cliche, story.

--
ShadeHawk

Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 11:50am for 2: Lessons

Great! Hilarious! Thanks for sharing.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:17am for 2: Lessons

Oh, God! This is such a fun bit of fluff! Don't give up on it yet! I can't stop grinning! This sounds so much more like Harry than so many other fics that portray him as some sort of Don Juan!

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:51am for 2: Lessons

that was ... different

Jeff1 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:51am for 2: Lessons

Keep up the good work. After a day wrangling pre teens I needed a good laugh and this fit the bill perfectly. Thanks for making my day a little brighter.

Meg posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 2:37am for 2: Lessons

This is really great! I do hope you keep up with this as these two chapters had me smirking or grinning or giggling the whole time.

Thanks!

Meg

Jamie46 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:56pm for 2: Lessons

hehehe ;) This was cute; I enjoyed the straight-forwardness of it and how Harry actually *was* a bad kisser, as opposed to just saying it or being surprisingly naturally gifted. :) Great job. I really enjoy your stories and look forward to whichever update comes next! :-D

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:32pm for 2: Lessons

Oh, poor Harry. *evil grin* We can only hope he and Hermione discover some mutual feelings and manage disclose the information before it's too late. Hermione looked like she had been kissing the gigant squid, must be like what I used to call kissing a dead cod oh-so-many years ago. I hope Harry improves ('my' cod never did and was ditched). Looking forward to the next part!

TheBlackPearl posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:22pm for 2: Lessons

I don't know what I was expecting, but I really did enjoy this. Poor Harry. He's such a mess. And Hermione with her notebook. I couldn't help but laugh.

I'm just not sure whether Ron is put out or not. Time will tell I guess.

I do hope you'll write another chapter.

Pam

lauren2 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 4:41pm for 2: Lessons

i loved the first chapter and now i also love the second chapter
this is one of the first reasonably believable h/h stories i'v come across where ron isn't a complete jerk/nutter
this is a great story please continue

am i right in asumming that there will be r/l romance?

Lauren

Mr.Intel replied:

I'm really glad you like my characterizations, as any story is sunk without them.

As to R/L, you got that right!

--M