By Mr. Intel
Reviews
jakjakattk posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2008 2:31pm
how about another chapter, I was laughing my fool head off. keep up with the new ideas
Phil Boswell posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 7:18pm
Oy! Don't stop there!
MoonlightVixen posted a comment on Saturday 24th February 2007 12:13pm
Dancing, kissing and cinnamon lip gloss.... This fic is just getting better and better!
MoonlightVixen posted a comment on Saturday 24th February 2007 12:05pm
I love the fact that Ron recognized Hermione's "Classic Berry" lipstick!
MoonlightVixen posted a comment on Saturday 24th February 2007 11:51am
Ginny Weasley's loss, Hermione's incredible gain!
Leticia posted a comment on Saturday 4th November 2006 5:13am
I haven't laughed that hard in ages! Poor old Harry, but at the same time lucky old Harry...
jessie179 posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 2:59am
Interesting idea. I like it so far.
Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 3:35am
it looks as though you're more than just a little fun with this and, i must admit, i'm enjoying it as well if not more so. i particularly like the premise that harry's confidence is unsettled until i suppose hermione straightens out his "kissability." looking forward to the next instalment.
Mr.Intel replied:
Definitely having fun! I know it's been done before, but I had to try my hand at it. Thanks for the review.
Graup posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 1:21pm
I enjoyed where you are going with this. It sounds like fun.
Harry/Hermione is sometimes difficult to pull off, but I like your start so far.
Ginny doesn't seem to be much of a person in this fic. You'd think she might take a more aggresive stance, being that she pined over Harry forever.
Anyway, I look forward to new chapters. Thanks for sharing your story.
Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 8:31am
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I always enjoy Reading about Luna. For some reason the world seems to make a little more sense afterward.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 7:56am
This is such a fun story. I'm really enjoying it.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 2:36am
I had somehow missed this chapter, so read it after #3 - what a hoot, only Hermione would do critical analysis and map out a pathway to a "successful" final destination. Project management at it's best.
thanks
Uldihaa posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 8:07am
This is turning into a rather interesting story. I'm rather amused that Hermione has found such a unique way to date Harry. I wonder how much longer it will be before Harry catches on. It also seems that Ron and Luna are fully aware of what Hermione's ultimate goal is.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 6:56am
A girl invites him to a date, and then proceeds to show him the basics of dancing as well as snog his brain out . . . I must be extremely unlucky . . .
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 3:52am
Kudos to the author . . . an awesome chapter. I look forward to Harry finally getting a clue . . . how many people will tease him about it before he does?
'Mione
john2 posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 3:40am
Following her to the Atrium, she spotted a flash of red...
I think that "she" should be a "he."
Otherwise - another good chapter.
Mr.Intel replied:
Got it. You're still a good beta, no matter what anyone else says.
Katie posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 12:45am
IT WAS O.K!!!!!!
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 10:15am
buwhahahha! Great story so far, loved this chapter too! The bit with the death by giants at the end was great, though I could really see this as almost 5th year harry post GOF (ie right after the yule ball) or so in this case. Excellent job all around! The dialogue is hillarious, especially ron's comment when harry got back!
Don posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 2:19am
Great second chapter. I'd really like to see this story go further. Good luck with the rest of your writing!
kyoshi711 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th July 2008 4:02pm