sugarbear68 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 11:17pm

Ok, I have got to say that I love this story!!! Please continue. I have you on my alert list on another site, too, and saw that this story was now being posted there as well. Please keep up the good work. Also have to say, as someone who abhors fish in general but especially fried, had a moment of squeemishness (sp?) when he had fish and chips for lunch before his lessons -- urgh! But personal issues aside, I LOVE THIS! Thank you.

Malaskor posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:07am

Hehehehe... funny, especially the chart part. That is typical Hermione, always ordered and "by the book" ;)

Well done.

Scott M posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 6:56am

Points to you for using the phrase 'wounded Erumpent'. :-D In fact, that entire sentence was very amusing and nicely put together.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:38am

For having absolutely nothing planned I love this... it is amusing and bright and cheerful... something every depressed person should read!

As Always,
Muirnin - Who hopes you keep going with this while I try to resurrect my own writing and find it a new home!

Quizer posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:35am

Poor Harry... He really has a lot to learn, eh? Maybe he should have brushed up a bit beforehand, by reading some romance novels. Having a general idea what to do might have helped...


Quizer

ShadeHawk posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 12:39am

I hope that there will be next chapter. Really, really nice. I hope for some good hints on the art of kissing!

Would you build the whole A.U. for that story (like how Voldemort was wanquished, what had happened to the rest of classmates etc.), hinting at the past A.U.-ish story in discussion, descriptions and sometimes flashbacks?

Thanks for a nice, and not [much] cliche, story.

--
ShadeHawk

Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 11:50am

Great! Hilarious! Thanks for sharing.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:17am

Oh, God! This is such a fun bit of fluff! Don't give up on it yet! I can't stop grinning! This sounds so much more like Harry than so many other fics that portray him as some sort of Don Juan!

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:51am

that was ... different

Jeff1 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:51am

Keep up the good work. After a day wrangling pre teens I needed a good laugh and this fit the bill perfectly. Thanks for making my day a little brighter.

Meg posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 2:37am

This is really great! I do hope you keep up with this as these two chapters had me smirking or grinning or giggling the whole time.

Thanks!

Meg

Jamie46 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:56pm

hehehe ;) This was cute; I enjoyed the straight-forwardness of it and how Harry actually *was* a bad kisser, as opposed to just saying it or being surprisingly naturally gifted. :) Great job. I really enjoy your stories and look forward to whichever update comes next! :-D

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:32pm

Oh, poor Harry. *evil grin* We can only hope he and Hermione discover some mutual feelings and manage disclose the information before it's too late. Hermione looked like she had been kissing the gigant squid, must be like what I used to call kissing a dead cod oh-so-many years ago. I hope Harry improves ('my' cod never did and was ditched). Looking forward to the next part!

TheBlackPearl posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 11:22pm

I don't know what I was expecting, but I really did enjoy this. Poor Harry. He's such a mess. And Hermione with her notebook. I couldn't help but laugh.

I'm just not sure whether Ron is put out or not. Time will tell I guess.

I do hope you'll write another chapter.

Pam

lauren2 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 4:41pm

i loved the first chapter and now i also love the second chapter
this is one of the first reasonably believable h/h stories i'v come across where ron isn't a complete jerk/nutter
this is a great story please continue

am i right in asumming that there will be r/l romance?

Lauren

Mr.Intel replied:

I'm really glad you like my characterizations, as any story is sunk without them.

As to R/L, you got that right!

--M

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 4:07pm

*chuckle* This is a nice light touch of humor, with a potential for romance, that is progressing nicely.. "Please, sir, may I have some more?"

freakyfinger posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 3:15pm

And once he masters that skill he'll have another thing to deal with . .. or more specifially, another person

DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 2:47pm

Keep this one going it's funny ina the good way. How far past Hogwarts are they? Also did Ron really punch Demelza in 6th year or is that a bit of AU you did for the story? Anyway nice work update when you can.

Sonicdale posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 2:02pm

heh.
Bad!Kisser Harry?
Oh, man, you've set a new fanfic record.
He's not a super kisser on the first kiss? Wow, reality in HPverse.

Liked how you kept Ron and Hermione in character. Harry is pushing his "dumbfoundedness" a bit -- hope he gets somewhat of a clue soon. ;)

Good work.

Mr.Intel replied:

Yeah... Clueless!Harry is the only fanfic convention I've really kept here, so I'm going to drive it for at least two chapters.   ;)   The clue-stick will hit him soon.   Very soon.

David Thacker posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 1:56pm

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Mr.Intel replied:

Thank you, David!